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Developmental Editing

Hi, I’m Cecilia!

I’m a developmental editor dedicated to helping authors refine their stories so that their writing will resonate with readers. I especially enjoy working with indie authors, first-time authors, and authors from underrepresented communities. I will help you polish your manuscript so that your story is more effective at grabbing your readers' attention so that they can't stop reading until they reach the very end. I offer developmental editing and line editing services to help shape your manuscript to be the best it can be.

As an editor, I fully understand that you, the author, are the one who retains full creative control of your work. I am here to support your creative writing process. Through my editorial guidance, I will work to bring the best out of your story and ensure that your voice comes through clearly.

Through years as a lifelong reader and thinking about storycraft, I have internalized what makes a story work and the pitfalls that can derail a good story. I went on to earn a Master's in Book Publishing at Portland State University where I worked at Ooligan Press and gained a holistic education in book publishing. I am also experienced in direct author communications through my work at Amazon Publishing.

Books I’ve Edited

What editors at Ooligan Press say about me

β€œYour editorial voice is strong and you deliver praise and critique with kindness, clarity, and professionalism. Any author would benefit from your compassionate yet constructive feedback.”

Alena Rivas, 2022-2023 Acquisitions Manager

β€œYou have a strong editorial sense and gave very specific, thoughtful observations and suggestions.”

Angela Griffin, 2023-2024 Acquisitions Manager

β€œβ€¦incredible editorial eye and sense of judgment. Particularly impressed with the queries you made….”

Jessica Pelton & Tanner Croom, Spring 2024 Managing Editors

Editorial Services

  • For authors who just need some overall guidance about where their manuscript is going wrong and how to fix it. I will write a revision letter that details the structural-level story problems β€” and offer solutions. Note that I will not leave queries in the manuscript.

  • The whole package. This is a big picture, structural-level edit where I will carefully go through your manuscript with queries, identify story problems, and provide a detailed revision letter with editorial solutions.

  • This is editing focused on the sentence level. I will ensure that your prose sings, eliminating superfluous words and making sure each word is placed where it’s meant to be.